Recent Reads: “Shadow Scale” by Rachel Hartman

Shadow Scale cover

Shadow Scale
Rachel Hartman
Fantasy / Young Adult
596 pages


The kingdom of Goredd: a world where humans and dragons share life with an uneasy balance, and those few who are both human and dragon must hide the truth. Seraphina is one of these, part girl, part dragon, who is reluctantly drawn into the politics of her world. When war breaks out between the dragons and humans, she must travel the lands to find those like herself—for she has an inexplicable connection to all of them, and together they will be able to fight the dragons in powerful, magical ways.
As Seraphina gathers this motley crew, she is pursued by humans who want to stop her. But the most terrifying is another half dragon, who can creep into people’s minds and take them over. Until now, Seraphina has kept her mind safe from intruders, but that also means she’s held back her own gift. It is time to make a choice: Cling to the safety of her old life, or embrace a powerful new destiny?

Rating:  4.5 / 5

Is it possible to love a sequel more than its predecessor? Well, I can think of a couple occasions where a second novel was just as good as the first book – but an entire grade-point higher? That’s a rare and special case. Yet Shadow Scale, the sequel to Rachel Hartman’s YA fantasy debut Seraphina, was one of those cases for me. Because while I enjoyed the first book but had some issues with it, this second and final installment to the duology soars high and smoothly from Chapter One to the last page.

Shadow Scale begins about three months after Seraphina ends, and shines with all of its predecessor’s strengths and then some. For starters, Hartman sends Seraphina on a journey to find her half-dragon brethren, allowing readers to see and fall in love with the lands beyond Goredd. Ninys, Samsam, and Porphyry each come alive with distinct flavors and histories. I had a blast picturing the architecture, nature, even the clothing worn by the people Seraphina met during her travels. This is very much a quest story, and one that isn’t spared of obstacles. Seraphina runs into all kinds of trouble along the way: inclement weather, seasickness, unfavorable terrain, and – most importantly – characters with their own agendas.

Speaking of characters, Hartman does a wonderful job with expanding on her colorful, entertaining cast from Seraphina. Old favorites of human (Princess Glisselda, Prince Lucian Kiggs), dragon (Ardmagar Comonot, Eskar, and Uncle Orma), and half-dragon kind (Abdo, Lars, Okra Carmine) return from the first book. There are plenty of new ones, too, particularly the new half-dragons. They all exude unique personalities – and if I shared one anecdote for each character, this review would be about a mile long. 😉

I can tell you this much, though: Seraphina’s sidekick Abdo is my favorite – no, FAVORITE – character from Shadow Scale. A monkey-like acrobat who can only communicate telepathically because of dragon scales covering his tongue, he’s absolutely hysterical and so lovable that I wanted to reach through the pages and hug him. Jannoula, on the other hand, is a fantastic “hate-to-love-yet-love-to-hate” villain. Pretentious and deceptive, with a tortured past (literally) that explains her state of mind perfectly, she singlehandedly turns a mainly external conflict that impacted Seraphina’s home into a deeply personal fight for Seraphina to save everyone and everything she loves.

Writing-wise, Hartman once again blends humor and intellect to create Seraphina’s distinct narrative voice. Despite my mixed feelings about this approach in Seraphina, I thoroughly enjoyed it in Shadow Scale. I lost count of how many times Hartman floored me with her extensive vocabulary (how often do you see words like “conflagration,” “subterfuge,” or “viscous” in a YA novel?) and made me laugh out loud by describing the absurdity Seraphina saw in a situation. Combining the two qualities is a rare talent; and though it might not make sense on paper, it does when you read Hartman’s work.

Where Hartman truly improves with Shadow Scale is her pacing. No early info-dumps to drag things down this time. Instead. readers can get a recap on Seraphina by visiting a “scholarly” preface that summarizes the first book in about 2 pages. From there, Hartman lets the story unfold leisurely, spending just enough time on details, relationships, and plot points so readers can see the “big picture” without feeling overwhelmed. Maybe that explains why Shadow Scale is a beast of a YA novel (almost 600 pages). But I hardly noticed the length, because the story was such a joy. In fact, I wasn’t ready to leave Seraphina and her world when the end arrived.

That brings me to my only nitpick for Shadow Scale. The climactic battle is awesome in theory, but Hartman wrote it in a way that was difficult to follow. I had a very hard time picturing what was going on. Also, apart from the epilogue (which broke my heart in a beautiful, incremental way), the ending seemed too convenient for everyone. Without going into spoiler territory: I was expecting Seraphina to feel sad or lonely because of her circumstances. Instead, she readily accepts them, making a weird leap in “emotion logic” that didn’t make sense to me.

Up until that point, though – ohhhhhhh, I was so close to giving Shadow Scale a perfect score! This was a satisfying, deftly handled end to Seraphina’s story, and arguably the strongest of the two books. The world of Goredd and beyond expands so fully that everything about it – even the dragons – seems as real as the birds and trees outside my window. Apparently Hartman is already working on two new novels set in Seraphina’s world and with a new protagonist, so I’m curious to find out what will happen and who we’ll meet. If you liked Seraphina, don’t miss Shadow Scale. It will be worth your time, a space on your bookshelf, and a place in your heart.

Have you read Shadow Scale? What did you think of it? If you haven’t read it yet, do you think you might check it out based on what you’ve read above? Let me know by commenting below or visiting the same review at Amazon or Goodreads.

17 thoughts on “Recent Reads: “Shadow Scale” by Rachel Hartman

  1. You know something? I am loving your reviews of fantasies so much that I am sure it won’t be long before they become my second most favourite genre of YA books 🙂 I am adding this one and its first book to my To-read list. The thing that got me intrigued about this book is the way you have described the character of Abdo, and your line …..which broke my heart in a beautiful, incremental way….

    Yessir, this is definitely on my list of reading, provided I manage to get it here 🙂

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    • Awwwww, thank you, Zephyr. I hope you’re able to find Seraphina and Shadow Scale where you live so you can read them!

      Abdo is one of the most lovable fictional characters I’ve ever “met.” In hindsight, I’m thrilled that Rachel Hartman made him a more prominent character in Shadow Scale (he’s in Seraphina, but his role is more limited). And he’s probably the biggest source of the laughs I got out of SS, too. 😀


  2. Fantastic review! It seems the bloggers I follow either loved this or hated this. I’ve seen it get DNFed twice already, and so I’m so very glad to see a high rating from you that balances the scales a bit. I see some great things I know I’ll love, and yet I also see some things that might bother me. I’m curious to see where I will stand because I really don’t know anymore! How exciting 🙂

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    • Thanks, Mogsy! When do you think you’ll get around to reading Shadow Scale? (I’m assuming you’ll also review it for Bibliosanctum…?)

      I’ve seen a couple DNFs for Shadow Scale, too, and I can see why some people might not like the book. I actually was a little apprehensive about SS myself, since I’d heard it was going to focus a little more on Seraphina’s mind-garden. Those scenes seemed pointless to me during the first book. But Shadow Scale gave me a new perspective on the mind-garden and how it’s both useful for Seraphina’s quest yet detrimental to her personal growth. Another reason why I adore Shadow Scale – but I left it out of the review because, well, the review was long enough without it. *lol*


  3. I most definitely want to read this series, now! I did before, but now I want to even more. I have such a long list of books to read, but I’m moving this series further up the list. I hope to get to it sometime this year. 🙂

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  4. I read it as well and enjoyed it but I did find faults with it so though I love the fast-paced adventure in this one I prefer the slow progression in Seraphina. I absolutely love the world building though and that we learn more about the religion and the saints. I was looking forward to that. I was so curious about St. Yirtrudis.

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    • Thanks for stopping by, Zezee! I’ve read a few reviews by people who didn’t care for Shadow Scale as much as Seraphina. And I think I understand why. It’s fascinating how different our opinions can be about the same books and what some of us will pick up on that others may have overlooked. But that’s part of the beauty of the reading world, isn’t it? 🙂


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